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Legal Jargon: All characters and likenesses are property of Tim Buckley

I don’t really like these “game parody” comics, they’re poorly written, overly wordy, and just plain not funny. I’m debating whether or not to just stop editing them all together, and just stick with character humor, and storylines. Anyone out there have an opinion one way or the other?

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Legal Jargon: All characters and likenesses are property of Tim Buckley

I have to say, I actually like this edit. I know, I know, it still sucks. I just like the idea that Ethan is SO stupid he can’t pick between beer or soda. OH! and after making fun of painkiller, now he’s suggesting it’s a hardcore game. Stick to your guns jackass.

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Legal Jargon: All characters and likenesses are property of Tim Buckley

I didn’t change a lot here, but this comic still sucks. The problem with strips like this is that most of the wordswordswords are necessary to the plot.

Here’s a thought: If Tim writes and draws this comic, and owns the site, why doesn’t he just re-size his panels if the dialogue boxes would go outside his panels and even in some cases run INTO other panels? It’s ugly, and he can fix it. but he just doesn’t.

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~ by Tornadic on March 5, 2010.

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